Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at frequent e mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them so that you could be taught what to do otherwise.
Be a part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising and marketing at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
Will,
I wished to observe up on my final e mail.
Our retention charge working with firms like yours is 87% after 2 months as a result of we maintain bringing them new clients.
Our e mail tech + your killer supply, despatched 100s of instances a day to focused lead lists – you’ll persistently generate leads.
Merely put – what we do, works.
As a result of we’re particularly searching for information, analytics and software program firms much like you, we solely have 5 spots out there in your trade.
Would you be open to debate the above over a fast 15-minute name?
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Comply with Up 1: BAR Your Case Research
Will, are you conversant in _____?
After we met them, they appeared to be at an identical stage. Most leads got here by means of their PLG movement.
We bolted onto their outbound staff. Particularly, we targeted on serving to scale up their particular person person base.
Consequently, their staff needed to 2x to handle the certified inbound. Month-to-month MRR progress has 2x’d.
Has your staff completed any outbound for this but?
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Comply with Up 2: Considerate Bump
Hey Will, did you catch my observe?
I reached out as a result of we’ve been having a whole lot of success working with PLG pushed firms.
If outsourcing a few of your outbound isn’t a precedence, simply let me know. Comfortable to share a few of what we’ve seen working.
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